Sunday, February 5, 2012

Ok, so me and my friend are making a story, it's called 'Broken  Tales', it's kind of a romance story...not my style. ANd a bit of drama, not my style either, but to tell you the truth; it's turning out great!!! Heres a piece of the story, the newest part I just recently wrote a couple of minutes ago near the end of chapter 2:

"The day passed quickly, and before I knew it, I was having dinner with my sister, Mabel, and Uncle Max. Kara was still ticked off, I was still hurt from her remark, so basically, there was a lot of tention in the room. Uncle Max looked from me to Kara, me to Kara. I guess from our expressions, something hadn't gone well sometime during the day. His eyebrows furrowed and deep concern grew on his face."
(Oh, and heres another part the real latest! ^^")
" "Um..so..how was school today?" Uncle Max asked. Trying to break the ice I suppose, nice try."
So tell me watcha think!!! (Oh! AND PLEASE FOLLOW!!!)

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